Recount Evaluation

I think my recount was good apart from the fact that I know personally I didn't give my best at it. I think if I had a more interesting topic I would have done better. I think my begining was well done starting off with how classromm doors were blue. I think the change between new school and old school was well done creating intrest in both schools. I think I may not have described the last couple of days through the week well and that I could have done better.